Raven Hawthorne

[Raven Hawthorne]

RavenAngeloz Hawthorne



THE BASICS

Name: Raven Hawthorne
Nicknames: Raven
Age 16
Gender: Female
Years at camp: 2 1/2

FAMILY

Father: Sebastian Hawthorne
Mother: Trivia
Siblings:

• Children of Trivia
  

Children: N/A
Other: N/A
Pets:

• Aegias | Male Albino Kitsune/Malamute | Protector
  His Father being a Kitsune a pure white fox with that of nine different tails mated with a white Alaskan Malamute and which begat this mixture.
  

APPERANCE

Species: Roman Demigod
Hair: Brown
Eyes: Brown
Skin: Slightly Tanned
Stature: Atheltic
Clothing style: Casual and at times Formal, not to mention a little bit of flirty to the male gender.
Distinguishing features: She has a soft, yet brilliant smile and on her right ankle a birthmark that is oddly in the shape of a flame of fire, not to mention a scar on her foot from a sixth toe being surgically removed.

PERSONALITY

Likes:

• Fire
  
• Magic
  
• Rock Concerts
  
• Fighting
  
• Archery
  
• Hot Guys
  Dislikes:
  
  • Dark Magic
    
  • Unwanted Violence
    
  • Jocks/Thugs
    
  • Pick Up Lines
    
  • Country Music
    
  
  Strengths:
  
  • Street/Fighting Skills
    
  • Her Wit
    
  • Resourcefulness
    
  • Being Creative
    
  
  
  Weaknesses:
  
  • Pride
    
  • Feelings for Others
    
  • Unsuspecting surprises
    
  
  
  Fears:
  
  • Her Fatal Flaw being Discovered by her enemies.
    
  • Wrath of the Gods
    
  • Coloraphobia (Fear of Clowns)
    
  
  
  Weapons:
  
  • GOLDRYX | Two Imperial gold plated bracelets in which is combined with a gold necklace when the button behind the necklace and under the left bracelet when pressed armor sprouts out of them. while when the right bracelet's hidden button is pressed a good sized titanium imperial gold shield sprouts from it. This is something which she gets a son of Vulcan to help her make something from the forge after arriving at camp and being there for a few weeks, while the necklace was a gift from a friend and was modified by that friend of who's father was Vulcan making it be apart of this puzzle in able to protect her from being injured.
    
    
  • TALLONTHA | This is a double-edged imperial gold sword at least ten inch long blade and the hilt adding another four inches, sure it may look like she's compensating for something even though it helps at times.
    
    
  • SAGE | A silvery bow and arrow set which the bow is able to fold into what seems like a little hair pin/clip as the arrows unfold from what look like a bunch of small silvery pencils able to be retrieved ending up back in their case when after fired into the air.
    
    
    Fighting Style:
    
    She fights with honor and courage as her strengths and her skills as well as armor for her defenses. Able to shoot at the target pretty good whatever the cost. As well with being able to flaunt her natural gifts to give her a opening nothing compared to the children of Venus, but good enough to weaken that of her male enemies. Fast and flighty with her feet and with good reflexes able to dodge things even though not anyone can be fast all the time. She likes to be up close and in your face most of the time doing with hand-to-hand combat or also known as close combat, but if needed she's able enough to fire her bow and hit what she's aiming for at least seventy-five percent of the time.
    
    Overall:2 paragraphs
    
    She's a fiery confident and yet high-spirited girl who doesn't even seem at it sometimes even though she wears dresses and skirts when the occasion called for it. She doesn't care if she gets down and dirty for that's her way at times, always getting into minor scrambles and fights either with tongue or with the sword. However she is friendly at times even though she doesn't trust to well with others.
    
    Even though she may seem a little shy and protective of herself, even though she had to protect her heart and not to show much feelings for someone for one day it would be her downfall especially if that friend turned around and became her enemy. You never want to ask her opinion on something for she'll be honest and tell you something which you don't want to hear nor know of. Brave courageous and at times full of herself with confidence which made her seem she was too much even though other things seemed to contradict her own goals and traits she tried her best to keep herself calm and not seem unbalanced.
    
    
    HISTORY
    
    
    Born: April 15th
    Homeland: Detroit, Illinois
    History:3 paragraphs
    
    She was brought up in a world of fake and the reality of the human race as she was of much more noble blood and of a different kind of human or more half-human. Anyways I degress her mother being the Godess of Magic and the only one had seemed interested in her father for he created weapons for a living and it seemed like he created them with imagination and with a sort of magic which fascinated her. They dated for a little while until it was too late and she was with child in which she had to leave and within six to nine months later a special package seemed to land right on his doorstep of the one floor house with a small yard and with two others roaming around. For he had forgotten to mention that he had two kids from his first marriage and when it landed there it was his day of visiting them.
    
    Giving her a unique name and that of one of the animals which in itself was an enigma she was given the first name "Raven" and the middle name "Angeloz" which meant angel or something of the sort and her last name of her father's which was Hawthorne. However things didn't really go on to well with them for she had only lived with him a time until he thought she should visit him on one of his jobs in seeing of what he did for a living. Luckily at the time the other siblings was with her half-mother Angela and in school for that as well. Sure she had school and that, but it was a thing which he wanted his youngest to see how he brought food to the table and it was kinda like bring your daughter to work day.
    
    On the way to his shop in where they lived in Detroit, Illinois something odd happened as if it was her destiny to be alone or that someone didn't want her to live a happy life. For a truck rammed right into the side t-boning it and creating a major traffic accident and yet she didn't have a single fatal injury to her ten year old body and was for only a few scratches which would heal. Of course Angela didn't really care nor liked Raven and so the hospital had no choice, but to get children services into the malay which she got spooked about that and having to be in a house for it'd be wall-to-wall room of bunks. While she was waiting and had been discharged it was then that she booked the heck out of there to start living for herself and creating her own happiness, strange thing was that no one even knew she was gone as if by magic she was gone.
    
    In waiting until the investigation into the accident was over and the house which when and if she'd get to the age of eighteen would be hers. Creeping into the upstairs window propping it open even though she didn't even use her hands to open the window. As she gathered what she'd need grabbing some clothes and some weapons as she happened into her father's study she sought out the drawers knowing that he had a gun locked in a drawer and knew for sure of where the key to the said drawer was. As it opened she also saw a brilliant golden necklace with a weird design looking like a pentagram and a trigam going across it and placed it around her neck. she also grabbed the revolver and its bullets as well as finding that there was a interesting looking hair clip as she took that as well and a pocketknife placing all of these in a bag and on her person she stayed there even though it was quite uncomfortable being there she finally left the place to start on her way for she had family in Nevada or at least she thought she did.
    
    Walking to the train stop and being careful of her surroundings cause Detroit wasn't far from the crime filled city of Chicago even though it was controlled at times there was still no wondering who'd be lurking on the streets beside herself. She had found some money from which was in a safe taht her dad kept in the house. While she was waiting on the track something seemed to make a noise behind her as she turned around she saw an old woman which wasn't to odd, but it was only a second until she saw that this thing was sprouting dark wings and scaly skin like a snake skin. It wasn't the best place for not only was this where you'd catch the train, but also the underground it wasn't a safe place to be scared. As if this was to be expected the hag attacked her ducking down and seeing in her left perivial a white thing with four legs meeting the creature before it could make another attack, as it jumped the claws on its feet raked the scaly hide as a mist of white seemed to come out of its maul it was Ice for the hag was still in the air coming to land when it shattered in a million shattered pieces.
    
    She had been saved from being attacked by whatever taht thing was as if on cue the train came in that she needed bound for her destination going to leave the creature followed taking up a faster pace she almost knocked into a crowd of other passengers when a voice seemed to prick into her consciousness as it said for her to not be afraid and said more about what and who he was and that he was her protector as they stayed together on the train not seeming to find anything happening that made it an even worse trip there as Aegias the white albino malamute which at times seemed to sprout anywhere from three to nine different copies of the same white tail and while in the passenger compartment which she was in they seemed to talk telepathically more Aegias then Raven about what she needed to know before they got to her destination even though he had also explained that they needed to get somewhere else than that of Nevada even though it wasn't the best place for it was apart of the realm of Hephestus or Vulcan as it where.
    
    Getting off of the train finally there was something else awaiting them however as she walked to the end of the platform and started to walk away from the place with the Malamute at her knees when another seemed to be trailing them a man or not a man she didn't know and didn't really care to know either as they traveled at least a few miles she finally felt that the guy was still following them and turned around seeing him it was like a skeleton with gray-ish skin and a scent that of death. Raising the revolver and cocking the hammer to full she fired as the spent round went into and through the man and it still came as a flash of white that of what seemed to look like Aegias except this one was an actual wolf which was odd in Nevada for the mountain and woods where very scarce around here. As the animal attacked the thing that was a skeleton Warrior was torn apart Aegias pulled her shirt sleeve and they ran from it as the she-wolf kept on attacking when it was clear the she-wolf appeared ince again it appeared that this was the legendary Lupa which was told in the Roman legends or more likely legend.
    
    They traveled directly to the wolf house in California the stone gray house in which the Roman Demigods where trained in order to enter the Camp with good do-dillagence it was about a year maybe a year and a half when she was set on her way with the skills of the street and that which she learned in training on her way to Camp Jupiter they where doing good when a rogue cyclopi seemed to attack them in a downtown alleyway right next to a club that was only open at nights and she armed herself with the silvery hairclip as it turned into a bow and she took out a arrow which looked like a small silver pencil as it elongated letting it loos and hitting it in the eye as Aegias attacked the body at the same time it turned into dust, but afterwards a lonely raven seemed to fly towards them in the air landing on her shoulder she noticed that this was just your ordinary Raven and around its leg was a roll of paper tied to its leg taking it off she saw that it was a message from her mother.
    
    It was saying that this was a messenger and would be the link between them as well as it showing the specifics of her birthright at Camp Jupiter not to mention that which she needed to know. For the gods couldn't leave their realm so they had to send other forms of contact. She had a letter from her mother and new companion which was a mighty protector and the other a Messenger or to her a link to her mother. Arriving at the camp she saw the camp director and handed her registration form which was already filled out by her mother, for it was one of the papers which was tied to the Raven which she named "Torah" in which she stayed at camp until the next day when she was claimed to the fifth cohort as the years went by she kept on training along with Aegias. However it wasn't that long until she asked one of the Sons of Vulcan to help her make something in which they where two beautifully crafted bracelets and as well modifying the necklace in which from then on if done the right way two gladius sprouted up her arms and a breastplate came covering her torso and another precious thing which was a third ringlet of gold that would sprout out a good sized shield made with her help a mixture of Titanium and Imperial Gold becoming a great addition to her other weapons.
    
    
    
    ALL THE REST
    
    
    Name/Alias: LEONTUS
    Age: 25
    Experience: +5 Years
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    Face claim: Ariel Winter
    Referral: Dreamer
    RP Sample:
    
    

    
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    As the rain seemed to pour all around her in buckets and having no way to shield herself from it she endured it in her tight yet comfortable leather pants and this night she did notice there was a few more clouds than usual in which she grabbed her heavy leather jacket zipping it up to about her chest leaving a "V" formed by the jacket showing the top in which she was wearing of that night. As her dark brown eyes semed to focus into the night she was leaning atop of a flat rooftop looking over the city as if to get a birds' eye view of the streets or of the other rooftops even that of the sky itself.
    
    This rooftop to be certain was that of the building in which she lived being able to get the one with a rooftop access as thunder clapped and lightning showed more light onto the scene yet she was waiting for a call from a certain someone whom was one in which she was able to give her number for she had known of this guy as long as she lived a fellow hunter blessed and cursed with an eternity of living. Seeming to be one of the statues instead of an actual being of darkness using the roof as leverage while leaning over to get a better look at the alley down below concentrating and focusing her eyes.
    
    She almost jumped right out of her skin when her phone which was strapped to her hip as she grabbed it as it vibrated she answered it. "Gable it better be you!" as she waited for the other to answer, as a male's voice came on the line with age and experience yet youth and endurance. "Of course it is Rose you think anyone would call you?" For it was true she didn't hand her number out to every single person she came into contact which the question burned in her mind if he had found something then as if mind went to voice, "So do ya got something for me?"
    
    "Yes, there's one not far from your place at least a few clicks from where you are right now!" as it didn't really bring anything down still this is what she had trained and was to use her senses as well as her skills laidened with her favorite Machete angled on her back she was ready to go to action..
    
    

    
    
    
    
    This application was made by NotAllPixieDustIsGolden of Caution2.0 please do not remove this credit thank you!

[Dusty]

Ok while this app is much better in terms of fitting in with the plot and stuff their is still a few small things.

Most demigods only have one or two weapons that they personally own which is usually their weapon of choice, any other weapon they would loan from the camp when they wanted to use it. So you character having amour, shiled, three swords and a bow and arrow is quite frankly too much. My sujection would be to have either of the amour (which should really just be a breastplate) with either the bow and arrow or two gladius or the shield and the long sword.

Also the pets is again too much having too as most demigods don't even own a pet at camp anyway. It fine for pets to be listed that the character has at home but in the series very few characters have pets at camp. Also the elemental Malamute does seem quite unusal and while I do see how it ties into your story, I am not sure if it would be fair upon other members of the site to let you have something like that as then everyone would be asking for alsorts of different estranged pets which we can't allow since not everybody can have a pet at camp.

But other than that I think the app is ok and if you could mention which of the 5 cohorts she is in that would be greet as that is something I intend to add into the apps for furtuer refferance.

[LEONTUS]

Uggg.......Dusty thanks for the review dude, but its starting to get annoying and frustrating I'm about at my wits end even though it shouldn't. However I sent you a PM even though it might be a bit rude and that there is a reason. For I'm getting frustrated and as well as mad about going through so dang much of putting a single character through. I'll be gone from today till Sunday evening so whatever you say to either I'll see it then and again thanks!

[Dusty]