Madeline Llewellyn

[Madeline Llewellyn]

Madeline Llewellyn



THE BASICS

Name:Madeline Llewellyn
Nicknames: Maddie (to the girls)/ Lewy (to the guys)
Age 13
Gender: Female
Years at camp: 1st year

FAMILY

Father: Aled Llewellyn
Mother:Nyx (godess of the night)
Siblings: Alexis Llewellyn(3), Sevda Morgens (20), and Caden Morgens (15) (all human)
Children: none (hopefully!!!)
Other: Step Mother: Kiara Tanya Llewellyn (was Morgens)
Pets: none

APPERANCE

Species:Demigod-greek
Hair: blonde
Eyes: blue
Skin: Pale
Stature: Healthy-weighted 13 year old who does a lot of sport in her free time as well as singing
Clothing style: Punk rockish/ (borderline) harajuku
Distinguishing features:

PERSONALITY

Likes:pizza, japan, moto-vehicals, her friends, singing and sport
Dislikes:nasty people, holidays in england, snobs, words begining with Q and rain
Strengths: can speak Japanese, she's wise and quick thinking!
Weaknesses: easily distracted, dyslexic and easily annoyed!
Fears: death, peoples opinions of her and the feeling of being socially inadequate!
Weapons: a flick knife and a lighter she hides on her person (given to her from her father for protection). At camp she takes to swords and spears.
Fighting Style style: Kendo/ Judo/ Jujitsu
Overall: She is a kind sensitive soul though she seems think skinned. She is skilled in many martial arts and is very interested in Japan, even taking to learning the language to which she was fluent with quite easily. This mainly stems from her having been to Japan on a holiday once and learning origami. After this it continued to be what she wanted to do, turning into her aspiration for the future, to live there.


She is the judge of any fallouts between friends, and they all respect her decision. She is the law of them all, being of sound mind, and so hers is the final. She is an avid astrologer, turning to the stars to study but also comfort as she believes they are family. She is a rather pleasant girl. She is careful not to offend people and quick to apologise if she does. It's part of the love of life that her step mum taught her. She had an absence of mum growing up, she became very boyish in personality. It sort of evened off when her step mum came, and she liked her, honest, not like most others. They were a happy family and she is a happy child. So, what makes her happy? Well, she does like holidays in hot countries. Especially with her step siblings. She gets on so well with them. She also loves the night and stars. They are her comfort. She doesn't like hatred and pain, it scares her so much. Probably, stemming from the fact that her house got robbed when she was young. Although no one has really picked up on it.

HISTORY

Born: 18th April 1999
Homeland:Wales
History: She knows little of her childhood, because her dad was drunk whenever Nyx was around, so he had no clue of who or where she was from. He didn't have a name or anything. All he knew was she had dark hair, fair skin and beautiful eyes. So she has never had a clear image of what she was like or anything. So from a young age she never bothered to find anything from anyone about her, she is an eerie figure in her imagination.


During childhood, it was noted she was very bright, she came out with exceptional grades, but didn't care for her grades. People would bully her she would hit them, therefore, she got expelled a lot, but still got top grades. It was unexplainable as her dad had no idea how to teach her while she was off. She began to be neglected by the girls in her class at school to which she began to talk to the boys. Soon she began to not bother with girls. People thought it was unnatural, but her dad didn't care. He loved her and always would. In fact he loved her interest in sports he had a 'son' he could talk to.


She began to start to behave when her dad married. She showed Maddie guidance and love and Maddie responded well to it. She began to care more to her class mates and they accepted her more. She felt remotely wanted. She began to not be ecluded as much and continued getting the great grades she already had. This raised concerns between everyone because of her lack of consistancy with them. It was initiated that she would have councilling to make sure her grades stayed put. Although this seaced due to her 'kicking off' with her counciler.


Maddie was sweeping up her kitchen one day, when a vicious monster appeared to morph from an old stone statue. It chased her deep into the woods near her house, to the point she fell over and a friend, who unknown to her was satyr, named Carlson, rescued her. She doesn't know how she got there as she fainted as she fell in the water and that 'thing' got attacked by Carlson. She woke up a little by the time they got to the gate. She daren't ask how or why she was there. All she knew and felt was she belonged. At the gate she was met by a lady, and Maddie had a premonition that this was her mother. She ran to her and screamed "mum" she ran to hug her. The woman withheld, although she knew plainly it was her daughter. Her hand was held up and she was allowed to enter.

ALL THE REST

Name/Alias: Livi
Age:15
Experience:A few years now
Other characters: none yet
Face claim: Jackie Evancho
Referral: Jai Jai Grant via msn
RP Sample:

A horn blew. Maddie ran. The early evening wind blew her hair back. She felt the adrenalin build. She was ready to pounce. She would win. It was night and she decided to better her skills by taking part in a training game with some other people. It, she thought, would help in her navigation. She looked at the stars, no clouds. She sighed with relief. Everyone was relying on her sense of direction, clouds would have been disastrous. She stayed quiet, diverting to the river as she had a vision of a blockade. All followed. She signalled to some sections to split off, they whistled, in appreciation of her command. She whistled back. They understood she said.

*Rustle* She drew her bamboo sword, as she wasn't very good at refraining from giving pain. *rustle* She couldn't get what it was. *rustle* SHe attacked a near by bush, a weedy teen shouted "What the hell?" she backed off. He stood up, the weedy teen appeared to have been sleeping. She worried as she didn't know who he was. Her reaction was almost instant. She pinned him against the nearest tree, "who the hell are you?" she asked the boy considerably taller than herself, but by no means stronger. He just screamed. She asked again. This time a boy came foreward and said "he's new, saw him today, came through the gate!" She acknowledged the boys statement and said “move on”. They left the weedy teen to his bush, crazy psycho she thought.

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This application was made by NotAllPixieDustIsGolden of Caution2.0 please do not remove this credit thank you!

[Dusty]

Ok while the app is good their is a few little issue I have with it that he can hopefullly sort out.

First off her weapons will be more than just that at camp as though even though she might have just arrived it would be helpful if you added which weapon's she would take to at camp like swords, daggers, bow and arrow ect.

Secondly you could do with expanding on her personilty as it not what I would consider two paragraphs. I know people have different idea's put in my opinion it's just about one. I'm happy to help you expand upon what you have got like you could explain where he love of japenese things stemmed from and describe things that make her happy and sad, what makes her laugh and also what makes her angry and does she have a temper. All stuff like that. If you want you can also check out any ofmine of dreamers app if your stuck and what kind stuff to right and what length we are looking for.

Also while the history ideally could be expanded a little by talking more about the enviorment she lives and like if she lives in a rough area etc. the length is passible. Though the mention of smoking and alcohol worries me. It not just that I personally don't like the idea of a 13 year old drink and smoking but proboards itself also has rules about these sort of things please understand that I don't want to risk getting the site comprimised because of it. So if you could tweak that it would help put both mine and dreamers minds at rest.

And finally if you could also expand you roleplay sample so it's about 250-3000 words that would be great.

Please don't take any of this in the wrong way as I don't like having to tell people to fix apps but when you have rules they have to be stuck to. Hope this doesn't cause you too much of an inconvinience.

Dusty

[Dusty]

Ok I will accept this now Usually gods wont appear to their children like this though I known Nyx is one for defying zeus and so will let it slide as nyx is one of my favourite goddess. Just keep in mind children are usually claim by their parents symbol blazing above their heads.

[Madeline Llewellyn]

ok maybe I can slip that in a thread somewhere Thank you!!!!!